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W/C 6-12-21

Read the  original tale of Goldilocks and the three bears.


Lesson 1

Then using the story mountain plan your own traditional tale based on the story of' Goldilocks and the Three bears'.

You could change the name of the girl.

You could change where the story is set.

 Instead of eating porridge, what could  your character eat?

Instead of breaking the chair, what could your character break?

Instead of three bears, what animals could you have?

 Orally rehearse your story.


Lesson 2

 Using your story mountain plan write your own traditional tale. Remember to use the success criteria to make your writing the best it can be.

Success Criteria

 Full stops

 Capital Letters

Finger spaces


 conjunctions ( and , but, so when, because)