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WC 14-6-21

Starter- Add in the missing full stops and capital letters. Remember that proper nouns need a capital letter too. Rather than using a full stop you could use 'and/so/but' to join two ideas together.

 

Look at the samples of persuasive writing of the Palm hotel and school fair. Can you  spot the  following features of a persuasive text?

Structure

Catchy Heading

Key information   given

Repeated main ideas to persuade the reader

Pictures to  entice you

Important events

 Grammar

 Amazing noun phrases- WOW adjectives

Questions- Rhetorical

 !( excitement) or exclamation sentence

Use of bossy( imperative verbs) Come, join,

Starter- Add in the missing full stops and capital letters. Remember that proper nouns need a capital letter too. Rather than using a full stop you could use 'and/so/but' to join two ideas together. Can you spot any spelling mistakes?

 

Main task- read through the example of  Shimmer Beach Resort persuasive text  several times - Draw pictures to help you to learn the text by heart and put actions to  some of the phrases.

Lesson 3

Write out the  Shimmer Beach Resort text from memory using your pictures from yesterday to help you.

Make sure your writing has:

Finger spaces

Capital letters and full stops

Adjectives 

! and  ?

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